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NUS: Interest in the programme

Character-capped on the portal (treat as roughly 150-200 words; draft long, then cut)

Why are you applying for this programme, and what have you done to prepare for it? Describe the interest, prior experience, or aptitude that makes this degree the right fit for you.
What it’s really asking

This is the heart of Aptitude-Based Admissions: your genuine motivation for this specific degree and the concrete preparation that backs it up. NUS wants evidence of interest, not a declaration of it.

Why they ask it

NUS admits into programmes and weighs interest, prior preparation, and aptitude. A generic 'I love this subject' answer is invisible here. The readers are looking for proof you have already started doing the thing the degree teaches.

Three ways in
Open on the spark

Lead with the specific moment or project that pulled you toward this field, then show what you did next instead of stating a passion.

Name the preparation

Point to concrete preparation: a course you took on your own, a competition, a book, an internship, or a thing you built.

Match a real feature

Point forward to one specific feature of the NUS programme that fits what you have already been doing, not a generic compliment.

✕  Weak opening

“I am applying to this programme because it is one of the best in the world and aligns perfectly with my passions.”

✓  Strong opening

“I taught myself enough Python to automate my family shop's stock count, and the bug that took me a week to fix is why I want to study Computing.”

✦ Annotated example · Why Data Science and Analytics. Written by EssayLens to teach, not a real applicant’s essay. Tap a highlighted line →
I am applying to Data Science and Analytics because my flood map taught me that data is only useful once it is cleaned, doubted, and turned into a decision someone can act on. 1That project ran on paper. To prepare properly, I taught myself Python over two holidays and rebuilt the map in pandas, plotting the same reports as a heatmap so vendors could read it on a phone. 2I then took a free online statistics course and got stuck on conditional probability, 3which is exactly the gap I want NUS to close: I can collect and visualise data, but I cannot yet reason rigorously about uncertainty. 4I read that the programme pairs statistical theory with computing modules and a final-year project, and I want the theory so my next map predicts rather than just records. 5The night market problem is small, but the skill of turning messy local data into action is the one I want to spend four years getting right.6
  1. 1Connects directly to a real project, signalling aptitude for this specific programme rather than a general love of learning.
  2. 2Concrete preparation with named tools shows the claim is backed by work, which NUS rewards over enthusiasm.
  3. 3Naming a specific stumbling block reads as honest rather than polished.
  4. 4Admitting a precise weakness shows she understands what the degree actually offers, not just that she likes the field.
  5. 5Specific programme features prove genuine research into this exact degree.
  6. 6Returns to the original thread and states a clear, modest aim, keeping the plain English the school asks for.
Stuck? Start here
  • What is the first concrete thing I made or solved in this field, before anyone asked me to?
  • What preparation can I point to that most applicants cannot: a self-taught skill, a project, a competition, an internship?
  • Which specific feature of the NUS programme genuinely matches how I already work or what I want to do?
Before you submit
  • I show preparation I actually did, not just interest I claim to feel.
  • I name a specific feature of the NUS programme, not a generic compliment.
  • Every sentence points at this degree; nothing is reusable for a different major.

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