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50-500 words (500-2,100 characters)

Tell us more about one or two activities listed above that are most important to you. Why are they important to you?
What it’s really asking

UBC wants depth on what you care about most: not what you did, but why it mattered, what it cost you, and what you took from it.

Why they ask it

This is the most revealing question in the profile. It tests reflection, the thing that separates a list-maker from a thoughtful person. Many applicants describe the activity again and forget the 'why,' wasting the slot.

Three ways in
Pick what you would do anyway

Choose the activity you would still do if no application existed, then explain that pull honestly.

Zoom in on one moment

Focus on a single hard moment inside the activity and what it taught you, rather than summarizing the whole thing.

Weight toward reflection

Spend at least half your words on meaning, not description, since the reader already saw the activity in the previous answer.

✕  Weak opening

“The activity that is most important to me is robotics club, because it has taught me so much about teamwork, leadership, and perseverance.”

✓  Strong opening

“Coaching the U10 team matters most because of one girl, Priya, who cried after every missed goal until the day she scored and looked straight at me before celebrating.”

✦ Annotated example · Why the caregiving and the kitchen matter. Written by EssayLens to teach, not a real applicant’s essay. Tap a highlighted line →
The two that matter most are caring for my brother and the community kitchen, and I did not understand they were the same thing until recently. My brother, Sami, is nine and autistic, and most weekday evenings belong to him while our parents work. 1For a long time I resented it, quietly and guiltily. While friends were at practice or just doing nothing together, I was memorizing the exact order Sami needs his evening to follow: socks off before shoes, blue cup not green, the same three songs in the same sequence or the whole night unravels.2What changed me was learning to read him. Sami cannot always tell me what is wrong, so I had to get good at noticing: the way he taps his collarbone when a room is too loud, the half-second before frustration becomes a meltdown when I can still redirect it. I stopped trying to make him behave like everyone else and started trying to understand the world as he was experiencing it. That sounds like a small shift. It rearranged how I see almost everyone.3That is what I carry to the community kitchen on Sundays. I work the intake table, where people arrive already braced to be judged, and I have learned the same thing applies. The man who snaps at me about a form is usually not angry about the form. The woman who will not make eye contact is not rude; she is ashamed, and shame makes people go quiet exactly when they most need to speak. 4So I do at the table what I do at home: I slow down, I watch for the tap on the collarbone, the held breath, and I try to meet the person actually in front of me instead of the one I expected. 5These two things matter to me because together they taught me that paying attention is a form of respect, maybe the most basic one. Not the warm, easy kind of attention, but the patient, unglamorous kind that asks what someone needs before deciding what they should want. I did not choose to start caring for Sami. But I have chosen, over and over, to let it change me. That is the part that is mine.6
  1. 1Names the two activities directly and previews a connection between them, giving the short essay a spine. Starting with the private one signals these are about meaning, not optics.
  2. 2Admits resentment and guilt, which is risky and therefore credible. The hyper-specific routine details (blue cup not green) make the labor real instead of sentimental.
  3. 3Moves from duty to insight, showing genuine reflection. The pivot ('rearranged how I see almost everyone') sets up the link to the second activity without stating it bluntly yet.
  4. 4Bridges the two activities explicitly, proving the earlier promise. The parallel between reading Sami and reading strangers turns two separate items into one coherent value.
  5. 5Reuses the brother's specific gesture as a lens for strangers, a vivid, earned echo that shows the skill transferring rather than being asserted.
  6. 6Lands on a clear, hard-won 'why' and distinguishes what was imposed from what was chosen, an honest closing thought rather than a neat moral. Matches UBC's reward for self-knowledge over achievement.
Stuck? Start here
  • Which activity would you keep doing even if it never appeared on an application?
  • What is one moment in it that changed how you see yourself?
  • What did this cost you, and was it worth it?
Before you submit
  • Does it avoid simply re-describing the activity from question 3?
  • Does at least half of it reflect on meaning, not events?
  • Does it end on a real insight, not a slogan about teamwork?

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