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WashU: Who Are You? (Optional, choose one)

250 words

WashU is a place that values a wide range of perspectives. We believe those perspectives come from a variety of experiences and identities. In 250 words or less, respond to one of the following prompts to help us understand “Who are you?” Option 1, “In St. Louis, For St. Louis.” What is a community you are a part of and your place or impact within it? Option 2, “By Name & Story.” How have your life experiences shaped your story?
What it’s really asking

WashU wants a clear, specific window into a part of you the rest of the application does not show. Option 1 is about a community and how you actually shaped it (impact, not just membership). Option 2 is about how your lived experiences formed who you are. They are equal; pick the one with a real, concrete story behind it. Though labeled optional, treat it as required given the selectivity.

Why they ask it

WashU states it values a range of perspectives and wants to understand who you are beyond grades. This is where they look for self-awareness, contribution, and a voice that sounds like a person rather than an applicant. It also rewards effort, since strong students write it and weaker applications skip it.

Three ways in
Choose the prompt with a true story

Do not pick the option that sounds more impressive. Pick the one where you can point to a specific community or experience and a concrete moment inside it.

Show impact through one scene

For the community prompt, zoom into a single moment where you changed something, not a summary of a club's mission. One vivid scene beats three general claims.

Add something new

Make sure this essay reveals a dimension your activities list and academic essay do not. If it just restates your leadership roles, rewrite it.

✕  Weak opening

“I have always been a part of many communities that have taught me the value of hard work, teamwork, and giving back to others.”

✓  Strong opening

“Every Sunday I translate the church bulletin into Vietnamese for my grandmother, and somewhere in that hour I became the bridge our whole congregation leans on.”

✦ Annotated example · Community as the night-shift diner where she did homework. Written by EssayLens to teach, not a real applicant’s essay. Tap a highlighted line →
For three years my classroom was a vinyl booth at the back of Pete's Diner, where my mother works the overnight shift. I did homework there because childcare was a luxury we skipped, and somewhere between refilling ketchup bottles and quizzing me on vocabulary, the regulars became my study group.Frank, a retired machinist, taught me to check my geometry proofs the way he checked a part: assume it is wrong until it proves otherwise. 1A nursing student named Priya, cramming before her own shift, showed me that asking a question out loud is not an admission of weakness but the fastest route to an answer.What I learned in that booth is that intelligence is not something you hoard, it is something a place lends you. 2No one at Pete's had a degree in what I was studying, but everyone had something to teach if I was humble enough to ask. I stopped seeing curiosity as a private trait and started seeing it as a kind of generosity, a way of paying attention to people the rest of the world walks past.I want to bring that booth to WashU. 3In a study group, I will be the person who notices the classmate going quiet and pulls them back in, because someone once did that for me. I will treat the custodian and the Nobel laureate as equally worth talking to, because the machinist who taught me proofs never published a thing. 4My mother still works nights. But she taught me that a community is not where you come from, it is what you choose to build wherever you land, one booth at a time.
  1. 1A vivid, unexpected 'community' (diner regulars) instead of a predictable club or team. The specific character and his transferable lesson show self-awareness about how the applicant actually learned to think.
  2. 2Distills the anecdote into a genuine value statement. WashU wants to see what you would add to its community, so naming the value explicitly sets up the contribution.
  3. 3Pivots cleanly from the past anecdote to the forward-looking 'what I would add,' which is the actual question being answered.
  4. 4Concrete, behavioral promises ('notices the classmate going quiet') rather than vague claims of 'diversity.' This makes the contribution believable and specific to who she is.
Stuck? Start here
  • Which community has actually changed because you were in it, and what is one moment that proves it?
  • What is a part of your story that your transcript and activities list would never reveal on their own?
  • When have you played a role nobody assigned you, and what did doing it teach you about yourself?
Before you submit
  • Did I pick the prompt where I have a real, specific story rather than the one that sounds impressive?
  • Does this essay reveal something new that my academic essay and activities do not already say?
  • Did I show one concrete scene of impact or formation instead of summarizing in generalities?

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